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manic_224 Monkey	posted 03-13-2001 03:31 PM Wrote a song for the band I'm trying (pitifully) to form with my friend. It's depressing but it has a good little tune. That'd be the day. 1/ Mary Jane turned 16 on a Saturday When winter came around and snow was lying on the ground Adam asked her out the very next day The best couple around, everything going sound. Bridge: Everything looked alright, everything looked ok She never confided in me, always looked away. Chorus: But they found her body smashed up against a tree At the waterside of the lake near by me She had slashed her wrists and then dived to her death And now she lay lifeless and loveless, out of her misery. 2/ They buried Mary Jane on a Saturday Sky darkened out by cloud and rain falling to the ground Adam didn't come, he stayed at the lake all day Throwing flowers from the bridge and watching them fall down Bridge: He looked alright and I figured he'd be ok Never confided in me, always looked away. Chorus: But they found his body smashed up against a tree At the waterside of the lake near by me He had slashed his wrists and then dived to his death And now he lay lifeless and loveless, out of his misery. 3/ Looking out my window on a Saturday Winter's come around, snow is falling to the ground Just looking back remembering all the days You were the best couple around, everything going sound Bridge: Everything looked alright, everything looked ok But nothing was as good as it looked; that'd be the day. Chorus [This message has been edited by manic_224 (edited 03-15-2001).]
Britt ZooKeeper	posted 03-13-2001 08:20 PM "He had slashed HER wrists..." Intentional? I was thinking this song would be funny if it was sung as a pop tune...up and cheery. OK, maybe not. Great song, by the way.
Lotus666 ZooKeeper	posted 03-14-2001 04:21 AM Nicely done, Manic!
Roz_27 Monkey	posted 03-14-2001 01:45 PM Yeah, good song Manic.
Lord Destroyer Monkey	posted 03-14-2001 03:21 PM Nicely done, Manic. ------------------ "Wherever me chum Harry Potts is...in Heaven or Hell. I hope he puts in a good word for me when I get there. At least I'll be out of here."
Rockjock Monkey	posted 03-14-2001 05:30 PM Have you thought of a name for your group?
manic_224 Monkey	posted 03-15-2001 02:13 PM Joanna suggested 'Sarah and the wrist-slitters' but my friend and I have decided it would be better just to stick to Ophelia. No Britt, that's definately meant to be 'his wrists'. Although....
Rockjock Monkey	posted 03-15-2001 04:35 PM How about "Beer for a nickel?" That way when you display it on a pub marquee everyone will file in that night.
Joanna2 Monkey	posted 03-19-2001 09:11 AM Or how about "Big Dick and the Epididemites"
Rockjock Monkey	posted 03-19-2001 11:44 AM I liked the wrist-slitting one better.
Saikutaba Monkey	posted 03-20-2001 12:06 AM Tee hee...I love it. This song would be cool with a mid-paced stoner rock type sound. Of course Cradle of Filth could do it as well. I'm play bass, drums and electric guitar for a metal band called "Cerebral Hammer" The band members and I swap instruments for different songs. One goes like this... Verse I cut my wrists last night, Gave my blood to my love, I bled a thousand times, And I still don't know her. I am drowning in my flesh, She eats my soul, My blood is black with tragedy, Her mind scarred with deformity, Pre Blood on her chin, Dagger sinking in, Shes not like what you can see Chorus Shes killing me, I'm slowly dying, I feel the cold now, And I'm in love.. Verse 2 Now I'm a lifeless corpse, Laying in a bath of blood, I am so cold, And starting to see.... Now shes really smiling at me, Cause I know shes happy, And know shes loves me, Because I'm so cold, Pre Blood on her chin, Dagger going in, I know this love.... Chorus Shes killing me, I'm slowly dying, I feel the cold now, And I'm in love.. She is death and I am dying. Heh..... [This message has been edited by Saikutaba (edited 03-20-2001).]
Rockjock Monkey	posted 03-20-2001 09:42 AM Love song...
The_Karate_Kid Chimp with diapers	posted 03-23-2001 04:10 AM that's a great song manic_224.
manic_224 Monkey	posted 03-23-2001 05:27 PM thankyou

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